This is a nice addition to a universe that I have grown to love. It dovetails wonderfully, which is only to be expected. I can only wish that Isabeau had a birthday every month so that we could get more of your work in this AU more frequently.
- Erulisse (one L)
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 Reviewer:Nargil Date:October 29, 2010 8:56 PM
I like this, took me three goes to get all of it but with your additions to the wiki I got there in the end.
I find your developement of the Haradric religions fascinating even if I did get them a little muddled at the start you need a link to that wiki artical. (or maybe it's just me and my complete lack of knowledge about such things).
It's also interesting to see more of Andra's past especially the bits with Khauri. It also helps explain his reactions in tolerances, trying to sort things out with Pel whilst knowing he had just lost / or was going to loose his lover. Poor guy you don't give him an easy trip.
I like the way you write Brand as well. His innocent queries that just throw open the heart of a matter. I hope things in passages can resolve themselves now, interesting to see they both view each other the same way really. Andra wants (wishes?) him as a son and Brand sees him as a father and niether of them will say it!! I'll join the head wacking camp.
I like Peloren's line in the salle and Liahan's it's a good job they can all keep Andra in order. I liked Esteven as well I'm glad he got a bit more action in this (and a promotion) he throws a whole knew dinamic in it all.
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