Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Wonderful beginning. You have described their personalities just how I envisioned them and their verbal sparring was very well done. Your descriptive passages set the tone and the mood nicely. Now on to chapter two.
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[2] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
I just read chapter 2. Erestor and Glorfindel's ease in each other's company was portrayed to perfection as was their growing awareness to each other. I like the end where you showed Glorfindel's emotionally vulnerable side and Erestor's caring nature.
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[3] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Chapter 3
Darn Elrond for interrupting such a sweet tender moment. The two of them finding release at the same time but in different rooms with each others names on their lips was a nice touch. It was so poignant when Glorfindel said his final goodbyes to Ecthelion and realized his love for Erestor.
Now all he has to do is admit it to Erestor.
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[4] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
I think I am getting more frustrated than Glorfindel or Erestor. (grin) I loved the fact that Elrond was making indelicate inquiries as to the actions of his two advisors. Chapter 4 another wonderful addition to your story.
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[5] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Oh Naughty you for introducing a possible rival. I am so glad they worked it out and they admited their feeling for each other. I wanted to strangle Lindir for his interruption. (giggle) They did, however find a mutually pleasing answer to their dilemma. Well written again and pleasingly erotic.
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[6] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Poor misguided Elrond. Trying to match up the wrong elves. You captured Thranduil wonderfully, playful, lordly and slightly wicked. Erestor and Glorfindal are also sweet together. Another great chapter.
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[7] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Chapter 7
poor misguided Elrond. He needs a clue....
Another touchingly sweet interaction between Glorfindel and Erestor. The robes sound divine and the fabric was a clever innovation on your part. I loved it.
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[8] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
Chapter 7
poor misguided Elrond. He needs a clue....
Another touchingly sweet interaction between Glorfindel and Erestor. The robes sound divine and the fabric was a clever innovation on your part. I loved it.
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[9] Ebony, Gold and Mithril by:jenolas
Reviewer:aimless Date:08/26/04
What a grand finale to one of the most enjoyable Glorfindel and Erestor stories I have read in a long time. It was erotic, touching and oh so sweet. You are a gifted story teller with a delightful way at turning a phrase. Bravo!!!
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