Reviewer:Lianna Date:12/19/04
Very nice, but are the First Steps you're writing about Elrohir's or are you referring to your own recent first steps into the writing of erotica? Think about it.
Of course, what we all want to see is a long, involved, thoroughly smutty and possibly also angsty story that takes Elrohir from this point to the one depicted in Conception Day Gifts. We want to know how Elrohir and Legolas came to have such a solid, long-lasting, and intensely sensual relationship. Emphasis on the intensely sensual part. When you're ready, of course.
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[2] First Steps by:JayofLasgalen
Reviewer:Kalima Date:12/20/04
Wow, you're good at this. Don't feel shy about posting more! I very much enjoyed it, and will enjoy catching up on my reading as soon as "the season" lets up a bit.
I have to start a file of everyone's writings in order I should be reading them. What a pleasure!
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