Reviewer:Erulisse Date:12/11/10
Azalais - Chapters 32 and 33 are identical. Please reload Chapter 33 correctly. I love the story and wanted to progress in your final revision and find myself stymied by this.
- Erulisse (one L)
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[2] Amid the Powers and Chances of the World by:Azalais
Reviewer:Azalais Date:12/13/10
Whoops - sorry, Erulisse, that's what I get for going on updating chapters till my eyes crossed! And what a chapter to have missed out! Fixed now...
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[3] Amid the Powers and Chances of the World by:Azalais
Reviewer:Erulisse Date:12/19/10
This is the second time that I have read the story, but the first time that I have read it in final form. I really love the characterization of her AU character, Rowenna. Through the introduction and carried throughout the story, Rowenna comes through as a real person with realistic goals, fears and joys. I rank this up with Isabeau's "Captain My Captain" as one of the best of the genre.
- Erulisse (one L)
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Reviewer:Rad Date:12/21/10
I was waiting to start reading this after it was posted - I seldom start WIP anymore - but I just realized that chapter 2 and 3 are the exact same chapter, only the title of the chapter is different..
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[5] Amid the Powers and Chances of the World by:Azalais
Reviewer:Azalais Date:12/22/10
Aargh, sorry Rad! That has happened a couple of times in the process of cross-posting this multi-chapter monster from one site to another. Thank you for picking that one up - I've fixed that and double-checked all the other chapters now, so you should be able to read the whole thing unencumbered. Thanks for wanting to read!
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