Reviewer:Arynn Date:04/02/06
Truly magnificent! Like breaking open a
vug of common rock to find it filled with
sparkling crystals.
It's very difficult to write a story in the
first person and not have every paragraph and
sentence begin with "I" (for which reason I
detest first person narrative), but your
skill has created a wonderfully crafted piece
of beauty, a true masterpiece and a classic
for first person narrative. Good story, too!
My favorite pair, Gimli and Legolas.
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[2] Aglarond by:ErinRua
Reviewer:Arynn Date:04/02/06
Truly magnificent! Like breaking open a
vug of common rock to find it filled with
sparkling crystals.
It's very difficult to write a story in the
first person and not have every paragraph and
sentence begin with "I" (for which reason I
detest first person narrative), but your
skill has created a wonderfully crafted piece
of beauty, a true masterpiece and a classic
for first person narrative. Good story, too!
My favorite pair, Gimli and Legolas.
Report this review, 3208, for abuse of site guidelines.